Today is a day that we celebrate love. Though we usually we think of romantic love, I thought I'd share a true story of love in action. This is a story you can share with your children.
First a little background...Several months after Ed's dad died, Cindy, a neighbor, sent each of the family members a letter sharing a story from her childhood in the 1960's. She began her letter with the verse below.
We had heard this story before, but when Ed's dad told the story, he had always minimized his role and focused on the wonder that God allowed him to hear the young girl's screams. I still can't read the account from Cindy's perspective without tears. I took Cindy's account and wrote the story for children and it was published in a children's periodical. I used the normal author's liberties of adding some fictional details. The publisher also asked that I add some safety advice. They did not want any children running into a burning barn.
“We're
home, Mother,” said Cindy as she and Dennis threw their lunch boxes
on the table.
“Good.
Dad and Jay are getting home late tonight,” Mom said as she hung up
her dish towel. “I
want you both to help me with the evening chores. Go change your
school clothes and put on your warm coats. It is growing colder.”
A
few minutes later, Dennis headed to the barn to feed the cows. Cindy
and Mother hurried to the chicken house.
“How
was school today, Cindy?” Mother asked as she poured water in the
chicken pans.
“It
was okay. I got a good grade on my spelling test. And the parking lot
was finally cleared of snow so we could go outside for recess.”
Cindy placed an egg into the basket. “The third graders had recess
with us second graders and I was on the same team as Dennis for
prisoner's base—"
“What
was that?” interrupted Mother. A scream sounded from outside.
Mother and Cindy rushed out of the chicken house in time to see
Dennis dash up with wide eyes.
“The
barn is on fire!”
Mother
whirled toward the barn. Smoke billowed out of the roof. “We need
to call the fire company!”
All
three began to run for the house, but at the sidewalk, Dennis paused.
“Come on, Cindy! We've got to get the cows out!” Both children
turned and ran toward the barn.
Beside
the garage, Cindy stopped. She stared at the barn. Smoke now engulfed
the top of the barn, and flames were beginning to shoot out the roof.
Her feet froze to the ground.
But
Dennis didn't hesitate. He bolted toward the burning barn.
I've got to get the cows out of the barn.
He shoved the door open to the lower level of the barn. Dad
isn't here so it's up to me!
Cindy
watched Dennis disappear into the barn. She heard herself screaming,
“Help! Help! We need help!”
She
didn't know how long she stood there screaming; it felt like hours.
Why
didn't the fire trucks come? And why didn't Dennis come out of the
barn?
A
truck roared down the lane. It skidded to a stop and out jumped a
man. Cindy was relieved to recognize Mr. Martin, the neighbor from
the farm down the road.
“Where
are your dad and brothers?” he shouted.
“Dad
isn't home. Dennis is in the barn,” wailed Cindy.
Mr.
Martin ran into the barn and vanished from view.
The
house door banged and Mother joined Cindy. “I finally got through
to the fire company. I thought you children had followed me into the
house. Where is Dennis?”
“In
the barn,” choked Cindy. “Mr. Martin went to find him.” She
hopped up and down, hugging her arms tightly. Was she shivering from
cold or fear? Cindy and Mother stared at the barn door, their eyes
smarting from the smoke, listening to the crackle of the flames.
They
waited and prayed for Mr. Martin and Dennis to appear. With the top
of the barn in flames, how soon would the lower barn fill with smoke?
Was
that movement in the doorway?
A horse appeared, then another. Four large horses trotted out with
the cows behind them. Then Dennis and Mr. Martin stumbled into the
barnyard.
“Chase
the animals down the lane,” yelled Mr. Martin above the roar of the
flames. “Pen them in the pasture so they'll be safe.”
Part
way down the lane, they heard the fire truck sirens. The horses
spooked, turned the entire herd around, and ran back toward the
burning barn. The sky had become dark. The only light was the glow of
the burning barn.
Mr. Martin and the children jumped up and down,
yelling and shouting at the top of their lungs, but the horses kept
running. When they were about twenty feet from the children, the
horses skidded to a stop, turned on their heels, and chased the cows
back down the lane. Dennis and Cindy followed the animals, closing
the gate before running back to the house.
Dad
soon arrived home to find the firemen hard at work.
Though the barn was completely destroyed, all the animals survived
and no one was harmed.
The
next morning, the family sat around the breakfast table, sharing
details about the fire.
“I'm
glad you wanted to help, Dennis” Dad reached for a pancake. “But
don't ever run into a burning barn again. It is much too dangerous.
We can replace animals but not you!”
“Yeah.
I guess I wasn't thinking,” said Dennis.
“I'm
glad Mr. Martin lives close by,” said Cindy, “and that he came to
help us.”
“How
did he know to come?” asked Dennis. “I could never have gotten
the cows out of the barn without his help.”
“He
says he heard Cindy screaming,” Dad said. “He was in his barn and
had just turned off the milking machines when he heard her screams.
He looked out and saw the smoke. His barn is nearly half a mile away.
I don't know how he heard her call for help—”
Dad
looked around the table at his family, his eyes lingering on Dennis.
Wow, that gives me shivers! God is so awesome!
ReplyDeleteA scary but exciting story with a great message of God's omnipresence, a caring neighbor and family teamwork. So glad that all ended well!
ReplyDeleteI recall a time when one of our childhood playmates found himself in a precarious and dangerous position. His mother showed up out of nowhere, and we were all so amazed. How did she know to come? That incident (talked about in the neighborhood for years) was never explained as anything other than a miracle of God. Praise God!
Lovely story! Love in action is the best kind :)
ReplyDeletewonderful story.thank you for sharing it. God is always good.
ReplyDeleteSuch an awesome story. It's always amazing to see how God orchestrates things like this. What perfect timing! God is so good!!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story! I plan to read this to our children. This story is so powerful for your children as part of their grandpa's legacy. God bless!
ReplyDeleteNice children's story. But what is the relationship? Dennis is your grandpa? Who is Ed?
ReplyDeleteOh, is Ed your husband? That must be it.
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry. I should have been more clear. Ed is my husband. The Mr. Martin in this story is my father-in-law. Cindy, Dennis, and their parents were neighbors.
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